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Monday, December 17, 2007

It was eleven-twelve

I remember THOREAU said about:
" Not that the story need be long, but it will take a long while to make it short".

..our short story indeed may not be long,
but it has taken some time for the telling...

you may have taken a close look
at what is involved in your successfully path found me,
as far as the journey is concerned by you...

you have examined
some of truth and reality of this soul
so that you can understand
how certain feeling may be applied

you would not pretend
that the story simply depends on
learning a few hopes tricks,
artistic talent, imagination,
affirmation and understanding,
your fellow heart being also play important roles...

you creating of believable character on me
who are well orchestrated in our relationship
...and the line that the story follows...

with given enough length
my characters are coloured by the set
which you will see what is going on
but rarely hears your "voice"

so, you were patient to be wait
in a very long queueing line...
watching your become turn
of your purpose
some seeming significance,
and not be something which starts no-place

you believe that
"you don't have to get it right first time"
Is it right dear???!!!

you will never ever show
your attempts at a story to anyone, either me
Now, you get it down on telling me
however it comes out of your mind, heart and soul
you have learned to perfect it

so could I to consider with these words:
"It is better to read one poem a hundred times
and keep it in your heart,
than to read a hundred poems
and remember them not at all"

thank you for reading me
thousands times...

Note: It might be 1212a you remind.

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